Heart in A Cage - Comments

I agree. ^

That's why this caught my
eye and I don't even like
slash, well done mate.

beautiful.
not a cliche in sight.

i have seen this numerous times.
NO. YOU DO NOT DO THIS.
where the fuck do people learn to write like this?
hi my name is ___.
i am ___ years old.
i am gay/bisexual/straight.
i am in high school.
welcome to my shitty life.

the plot doesn't consist of:
my neighbor is a sexy beast - so ill stalk him - he ends up falling in love with me
i hate this boy - he likes me or likes to annoy me - i end up falling in love with him
arrogant/cocky/whore - falls in love - shy/innocent/cute
or anything along the lines of
omg i like you -
omg theres drama -
omg he doesnt like me -
omg he was in love with me-
omg even more useless drama-
omg we love each other together forever

thank god you know how to form sentences
you understand writing consists of plot. and grammar
the story's beginning actually leads up to "the story"
and blarrgh. idk thank you for writing, well.
/end rant

I like this, so it's going to be the one I put in my siggy, to make up for not actually judging the competetion. Sorry but if you read the last post I put on the contest forum you'll get it all.
=) ♥ +jazzi

great update!
I love your writing style.
more? :]

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm.
I like it.
Seems...Interesting!
Update soon, please! :]

This sounds like it could be very interesting.
I like how you're setting this all up.
I can't wait to see where you take this!