I really love this intro, Ella. You immediately drew me in with the soccer thing, and I like how you started with them watching and then went on to bring them to play.
The characters seem unique, and I'm interested to see where you're going to take this. The spelling is impeccable, and I love your choice of words. You've got this interesting way of describing things, and I can truly see their personalities.
I'm subscribing, darling. I can't wait to read more. The writing is excellent.
I really love this intro, Ella.
You immediately drew me in with the soccer thing, and I like how you started with them watching and then went on to bring them to play.
The characters seem unique, and I'm interested to see where you're going to take this.
The spelling is impeccable, and I love your choice of words. You've got this interesting way of describing things, and I can truly see their personalities.
I'm subscribing, darling.
I can't wait to read more. The writing is excellent.