The Lover. - Comments

This was really good.
I liked it. :D

Aww.
I loved the cab part.
Amazing Melly.

One Shot For One Shot.

I enjoyed reading this. It was short and sweet and didn't hesitate to get to the point. The description was good, but I felt like you could've added more to it. Some people may disagree, but that's just my opinion. I liked the imagery and I like your writing style.

The banner is really nice, and suits the story well.
The summary line is so cute!
This was cute. I loved it, a lot.
It's really short, and left me wanting more.
The writing style was fantastic, and the little flashbacks added to the story.
I liked the way it ended too
Very nice.

XD Melly, bb, I loved this a lot. I loved Brendon's little memory and the line about brushing off the fact that he wasn't going to be staying.
For some reason, leaving while someone is in the shower after a ~one night stand is something Ryan would do. I can just see it. You displayed Bren's emotions very well. And I think the line in the summary is facking adorable

Looooove.