Suck Life - Comments

  • Limited-Edition

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    Thought this was pretty good, keep going. :)
    February 21st, 2010 at 08:55am
  • Erin_bacon

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    I love this story and I can't believe that would happpen to her! Please post again soon!! :)
    February 20th, 2010 at 04:29pm
  • NaiveDove

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    this is goooooood
    February 20th, 2010 at 05:29am
  • killing_lonelyness15

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    please UPDATE I WANT TO READ MORE
    February 11th, 2010 at 02:58am
  • NaiveDove

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    Please post more, I hope that isn't who I think it is
    December 22nd, 2009 at 05:27pm
  • Maggot102

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    Continue please. (:
    December 22nd, 2009 at 10:45am
  • ChristianLovesYou

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    Work on your format and how you write your dialogue. Try writing longer chaoters also. I hope I helped. Keep writing! It sounds interesting.
    December 22nd, 2009 at 08:27am
  • NaiveDove

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    post more plz
    December 22nd, 2009 at 06:09am
  • OMGzgirl

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    I want to see what will happen next subscribe
    December 22nd, 2009 at 03:51am