I Need You Now - Comments

This is for 'One shot for One shot.' :D

I really enjoyed this. I love how it went from talking in her perspective and then into his. It came suddenly, and grasped my attention. I also love how it ended completely differently to how I thought it would, and it was sad but in a good way? Like, it was a harsh dose of reality and it made a nice difference to a fairytale ending where they ended up being in each others arms.

Well written, and I liked it lots.

Well done. :D

Your writing is really lush and pretty, and I can say I definitely didn't expect the ending.
It was a twisted romance, and definitely something fresh & new, yet sad at the same time.
It was totally believable; it felt kind of real.

Great job.

I really love this song.

I feel like the writing got better as the story went on, and the ending was truly beautiful. I never saw it coming. Good job, wonderful story.

It was so sad and like others before me have said was well written and flowed well with the song.
I loved how you went back from POV between the two characters often and I loved how you didn't name them, just went with "he" and "she." I have a story that does that ("Oi and a Porta Potty"). I think in pieces like this not giving the characters names is better (as long as it sin't confusing [too many characters or two "she"s]) because you're focussing more on the emotion then who they are as individual people which I think was the point in both our stories. I could really connect to this piece because something similar has happened in my life recently (the guy cheated) but thank god the girl was willing to take him back - because like in your story, they both needed eachother. I loved this, well written, deep, amazing. Good job.

One Shot For One Shot:

I love this song, and you used it so, so amazingly in this one shot. It was extremely well written. Like the user above me stated, it had interesting plot twist. This made a really good read, I liked it, so good job :)

I was very surprised with how the ending turned out, but I thought it was really well written, and had an interesting twist to the plot. I expect it wouldn't have been pulled off so well if you werent a really good writer

Besides the fact that this is one of my favorite songs, I loved this one-shot.
I like how they both need each other, but she can't take him back.
This was extremely good.
Kudos.

Oh wow, he beat her? Poor girl, I wouldn't have taken him back either. I like how it flowed and the lyrics of a song, I assume, go with what is happening in the story. Also how everything on his end is shattering...I like that. :tehe: Very good. :)