March 31st, 2010 at 09:51pm
:D This is really good. And yes, I do want a Brendan. You know, if you changed P!ATD's names, you would have a real original fiction. And I think that's what makes this so good. I really liked Henry but he almost reminded me of a little kid. I don't know why, but... he was cute. The other half of Panic! really aren't in here much. I just have one question? Why did the story just automatically spiral into this really sad, makes you want to cry, type of thing. That was really unexpected. For me anyways. And why is her Dad beating her after she stopped with Brendan? I know it fits the plot better like it is, but I was just wondering.
But I really do like it. If I didn't I probably wouldn't have spent my "school skipped" day reading your awesome story. Your a good writer. :D
He's so cute and funny and sweet! ^-^
Update soon!