Six Words-That's All I Need - Comments

  • IceStorms

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    You did a really good job.

    My favorite is "Your life is determined by you". I really really like that one. It really struck home.
    December 30th, 2009 at 06:26am
  • XSoulXLoverX

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    Very nice Job! :)
    December 27th, 2009 at 10:31pm
  • Sj Peltier

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    Nice work :]
    December 23rd, 2009 at 09:45am
  • rae.

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    My favorite was "Song in my head; keep it." I feel like it's talking about more than just music.

    My only critisizm would be that these are all about separate things- peer pressure, grades, parents, etc.

    I think you'd be looking within yourself deeper by coming up with one that encompasses all areas of yourself, and perhaps is not so obvious what it is about.

    I love that you were able to come up with so many though! Our assignment (in my english) was to make three, and it took me a good fifteen minutes just for that!
    December 23rd, 2009 at 02:52am