Love Is Our Weapon - Comments

Absolutely amazing, not that I expected anything different :p

Wow this is really good! You're a very talented author.
Can't wait to read more!

lovelovelovelovelove it.
:D

Quite lovely :D

I think this is going to be an awesome story.
I hope you update soon. <33

So far so good :D Keep the chapters coming and I shall continue to read and comment, :D

I like the beginning of this you added detail in all the right places, and the ending of this really didn't leave at a cliffhanger although not necessarily a bad thing : ) (sorry if this doesn't make sense)
I will for sure be subbing :D

I agree with the comments above. This was a wonderful story. Awesome detail, great emotions. All around good. A good vocabulary.

Pictures. Still images. Visual representations. Photography was my everything, and my Canon was my best friend. - I really like this. it's the first sentence I read on the page[probably because it was the first sentence] and it drew me in.

I like this story. The beginning of the chapter is very descriptive, in a kind of step-by-step way. Or like taking pictures.

Snap. One fact. Snap. Another.

I think maybe you include a little too much in the beginning. Or.. I'm not quite sure. It's the very matter-of-fact way you present it. "Pressing down on the small silver button in the corner of my camera, I captured the image, satisfied with my efforts." is an example of that.

But that's mostly just my preference in writing style.

Otherwise, it was wonderful! :D

I loved it.

Only thing that I found odd was the move but I guess that'll be explained!

[ is it odd that I'm really happy that you can actually use grammar correctly? ]

I'm going to sub.

- o.x

Oh wow, thats amazing! It has more details then any story on here, and not once did I even get bored. I don't know, but this is great.

I really like how you discribed how she was about to take the picture of the tree. For a moment I felt that. Or I'm just going crazy.

Even the boy's reaction was great.

:) Great job