Blood Desires - Comments

It would be awesome if you kept up with this project.

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So far I read the first chapter, and I am definitely going to continue reading once this comment has posted. I saw the status of your story and I understand what you mean. I had story that I deleted, because though the idea was good, the chapters weren't flowing. You can always rewrite the chapters you aren't happy with! But you're first chapter has drawn me in and I can't wait to read more!

Sorry it's sent me back here again. Your paragraphing is great and I can't see any spelling mistakes. Hopefuly it'll stop sending me back now, so I don't have to keep spamming your story! Keep up the good work :)

*did well, haha. Sorry, comment swap sent me back here for some reason. Like I said, this is a good story!

This is great, I can really relate to this as she wants to be a writer. It's great that the reader can relate to your character which I think you sis well. :)

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Alright, I chose to read chapter 25 because the title drew me in and I figured that you would have several comments on only chapter one but I hadn't realized no one else has reviewed this story for this comment swap. So here's what I saw from 25 [remember I haven't read the previous 24 chapters]. You're description in this chapter was good and so was the flow of the sentences. I didn't see any mistakes and it was interesting enough. Interesting enough for me to read the the first few chapters and see if I want to continue. Daniel seems like a bad guy and I really want to figure out if he is as bad as his presence gave off. Taylor seems alright as a character and I didn't read enough about Seth to tell if I liked him or not. Overall I can't comment on the characters just because I haven't read enough about them. Anyways, when I have a bit more time I will be reading at least the first few chapters just because I'm insanely curious as to whats going on in the story and how Taylor got with Seth.

add more!

OMG! UPDATES! :D
Loved the new chapter <3
Update faster please...?
*puppy-dog eyes* lol

Haha, thanks :) Yeah, my friend just adores Seth.

yay! new chapter
loved it
Seth had a pretty amazing life

I finally got around to reading this story
and I love it!
update soon please

Haha Taylor, you're such a goober, and for anyone who reads this, Antsinmypants101 is my friend Taylor who inspired my story. Love you Tayla!

man taylor really knows how to seduce a man. I just picture her as a the most sexist thing alive along with hot sexy fellow seth. mmhmmm. I have to say you just invented the hottest couple ever! XD

Hey I'm Taylor, too! I can't believe you don't have more comments than this! Love your taste in music, by the way. I think you should put up that playlist.
Surprising twist in the story after, what was that, her third "incident"? The title makes a lot more sense, though. I like that you try and go against the whole Twilight going gaa gaa over vampires thing.

I love your Blood Desires story! You are right. The first few chapters are slow, but it's highly interesting. I love Nathan. X]

Thanks! I appreciate it :)

Just finished reading the first chapter and I like it =) I'll comment again later after I'm done catching up!

OMG! i love it so much Taylor seems like an awesome person. I just love the way she thinks and acts and she is so funny. the way she tripped and fell i almost died! why do people keep attacking her though! But seth is a total hottie!
loves it!