This was a very well written story. Although, the context was a little hard to read with the picture from the layout in the way. But, you made this story into a very believable thing. I really liked it!
Way to depress me. No honetly I really liked the story, when i made that banner i had no idea it would be used on an avenged story about such a serious topic. You dealt with that topic well, you made such a believable story. As ever good detail to your story, kept a strong story line going through out. Nice job. x
Hm. This was...interesting. I mean I loved it dear, it's just what you picked to be wrong with him was a bit ironic for me, because I was having stomach issues a few weeks ago, and they'd gone on for a couple months, they still aren't completely gone but they're bareable. Point is, when I started looking up symptoms about what was wrong with me, pancreatic cancer was something that showed up about everytime and it scared the crap out of me. So I found that funny.
But anyway! I loved it dear! Even if it was really sad. :( More soon!
But its a good story, well written so far & different plot then most fanfics, I still can't believe you gave him cancer! How could you?! XD just kidding but seriously sad.