God this is definitely one of the top PKane stories I've ready so far (I am truly shocked that there aren't more on this website >_<)
She's turning him into a softy! And, thanks to your wonderful poem mentions I found one that you could maybe use it for a chapter you like it, it made me think of them.
Rainer Maria Rilke: The Lovers See how in their veins all becomes spirit; into each other they mature and grow. Like axles, their forms tremblingly orbit, round which it whirls, bewitching and aglow. Thirsters, and they receive drink, watchers, and see: they receive sight. Let them into one another sink so as to endure each other outright.
Thoughts: I fricken love your writing. This story is so good!!! Concerns: You're making me fall in love with Patrick Kane. This is a concern (especially right now) because I'm a Canucks fan. A Canucks fan who likes Patrick Kane. I feel like I have to re-evaluate everything I've ever believed in.
totally love the picture you have on for this story. and i also love the chapter. it was so well done. and i can't wait to see where you take this story. keep up the great work!!!!!