Subscribed :D Please update soon, I loved it! I think I read somewhere that this is your first story? It was great. Much better than anything any of my early work.
four: That shirt was so cute, wonder if I can find it anywhere before I go to the Net to buy it. Wondering what's going to happen next? Still wondering where the four guys went off to.
two: Excellent descriptions; loved the part where she faked cried. Wondering what the four guys actually do? What's going to happen when they eat with Charlie?