This is really good and fun to read.
December 26th, 2010 at 10:39pm
Awww, Patrick fic! It's been a while since i've read one.
How upset she seems to be without her boyfriend is something I'm sure a lot of people feel during Christmastime when they can't be with their significant other. I love the description of him, how she notices the little things and the description of his golden voice.
The scene where Patrick goes out and gets her attention is adorable, seeming to be reminiscent of their Christmases past, and it was pulled off in the cutest of ways. What threw me off was the "don't judge me" bit; I understand that you were making fun of Twilight, but mentioning it kind of takes away from the novelty of it.
Their meeting there is so precious and seems to work out in such a lovely way. I'm sad that Patrick leaves so early she feels that it was a dream or hallucination, but it made me smile a bit when he came back with Penny. She seems to be a cutie, for sure.
Overall, the story was very cute and flufferific. Thank you for entering the contest! :3
