OMGIGOSHH! THAT WAS AN AMAZING CHAPTER! sequel? haha. i reckon this story still has a long way to go!! maybe not a sequel - but maybe not saying that chapter was the last chapter and just continuing the story :)
I'm gonna be honest: that update was bad. Honestly, it was hard to read. I don't know how to explain it. How you wrote it how you made her react and all that was just, erg, I mean it was just *blurg*. It was a disapointment and only sorta got better at the end...hopefully the next one is better because I do like this story.