Quiet Boys. - Comments

I only read the first chapter so far, but I know that I like this already.
your layout drew me in I think.
And the way this is written. I like it.

ah, i really like this story.

like most of the comments above mine, it is completely original, which i adore. there is too many copy-cat stories on this site.

anyhoo, i loved it. oh, i'm subscribing, ps. :)

This is a great story. It's different from other stories and I like the style. I love the characters. Reading it just makes me feel....happy. You are a great writer and I could tell from only your first two chapters. Please keep updating:)

This story is wonderful. I love the characterization of both characters, and I love the descriptions you use. I like the way you describe minor details, using words that one might not always expect for whatever you're describing.

Keep up the good work, I really like this so far. I'm excited to see how their relationship develops.

Absolutely beautiful.
Your style continues to blow me away.

i REALLY like this story.
the style is excellent and its bizzare, but yet so lovely and amazing.
which is what i love.
update. :)

I love this! And I love the style you wrote it.

I already love the characters and they seem so real...just by the way you described them.

I absolutely loved the last line; it made me laugh a little.

I really can't wait to see where this goes. And I also love the layout; it's simple and pretty. :)

This story is quite .. Amazing, actually. The way everything flows is so distinctly unique.
I love the style, and the mood of it entirely. It's a lovely beginning.
Parker and Ivan are very well developed. They're so real; a quality more than half the characters in other stories lack.
I'm utterly enthralled, and I wanna see where this goes. Please write more. (:

This is glorious! I love what you've written. It's... different from what I've seen on here.

I loved it when you compared his voice. It was a rainy day. Absolutely brilliant. And both of their attitudes made me smile with amusement. Keep up the good work. You're an amazing writer. :)

Aww this is really good!
I love how he is so quiet...
It's cute :D

Oh, dear, this is a pain. Please ignore the [font] nonsense that clearly didn't work...

Yes!!

I love when I find genuinely original original stories around here!
How wonderful to have found your story! Truly, truly!

This line, especially, was so crucial, so poignant: "I think having all four seasons is important."
What a definition of character! (I know that I seem much too enthusiastic, but I'll be honest and admit that a high percentage of stories around here are complete crap, and yours has just lifted the veil of crappiness out of my eyes)!

Your syntax is great. The writing flows like a real mind's thoughts, and Parker was immediately real without any further explanation. Little things are what catch my attention. Little details. Parker is full of little details. And sometimes I feel a little purple myself.

I know that this isn't the sort of intelligent review you might have been hoping for, but I mostly just wanted to strongly encourage you to keep up the work. :) This has such touching potential, and I can't wait to learn more about Parker and Ivan together. Usually, by the way, I'm not a fan of romances.

Good luck with everything! Good luck!