Suck On It Mary, You're Not the Only Virgin That's Pregnant - Comments

Great Story.

love the new chapter (:

loved it, update soon! ^^

I believe that the concept and creativity of this is great, I just think the actual writing leaves a lot to be desired.
This needs to feel more natural, not so simply, and perhaps amp the vocabulary a bit.
Hope that helped hunny.

Wow, this is a really interesting concept. I loved how the voice shifts between each character's POV because I rarely see that actually pulled off in a story, most of the characters end up sounding the same.

I'm curious to know how Danni really got pregnant...so I'll probably end up reading more later. =D

I like it it's amazing

Constructive criticism: Stick to one point of view, two at the most.

yay for sex haha :D I can't wait to read more

I liked that :D very interesting

wow..... poor trey :(

Wow...... I like :D please update

aww poor trey, update soon ;D

I love this story so far!!!!! Please make chapter 8!!!! :D :D :D

I love the updates! And I actually quite like Trey :D

I like it :) Update soon pleasee

omg!!! please update again :D I really like it XD

oh lordie lord, sooo much suspense, what will happen next ? huuuuuh ?
loved ze update !

This is good

I love it! It's not like anything I have read before.Can't wait for more!
<3

I really like the story line. Good job there, but one thing is that I keep getting confused. i suggest writing on the top of each chapter the POV