May 6th, 2010 at 11:55am
The Thoughts of One Moment - Comments
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Sooooooo sad!! I hate goodbyes!May 6th, 2010 at 12:42am
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Loved the update
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aw youre welcome :)
your kitty really thinks it's a real mouse, doesnt it? lolMarch 30th, 2010 at 06:55am -
I feel like something big is going to happen while they're in Cali...
I can't wait to find out!!March 30th, 2010 at 06:28am -
I liked it. There's this thing though, your chapters always seem really filler-ish. I think if you added more description and detail etc. It would straighten out, I love it, but its like it's half way there. :)
Another thing is, I think you need to plan your characters more carefully, they're good but there are holes. Just the way they interact. On the upside, I do absolutely love this plot so :D :D :D HAHAHA.March 30th, 2010 at 06:18am -
Lovin' this story. Frankie is hilarious.March 25th, 2010 at 01:51am
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whoop, bad Rikki!
aw dont be sorry, it's okay :)
at least you still update your story unlikely me. lolMarch 23rd, 2010 at 10:26am -
can't wait for the next update,sure its good as the last one! ;DMarch 22nd, 2010 at 09:15pm
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This is really good. U should update soon. :PMarch 8th, 2010 at 04:46am
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Gerard is way too cute to be male. :)
Ahahaha, he's like ::adorable:
anyway, I loved the chapter, even if it was rather filler-ish.
I sympathise with you, moving is no fun -cheese-
update soon? kays. :DMarch 7th, 2010 at 01:53am -
Aww poor Gee.
Cute update.March 4th, 2010 at 10:39am -
aw it's okay. at least you still do the update :)
cant wait to read some more! XXMarch 3rd, 2010 at 01:19pm -
lol, loved he updateMarch 2nd, 2010 at 11:15pm
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frankie is a sexy stranger ;) ILL BUNK WIFF YOU FRANKIE!
Love the update!!! love the story!!! LOVE YOU!!! haha
update soon! Or i will have to release the hounds. :OMarch 2nd, 2010 at 07:54pm -
haha,well I loved the update,can't wait for the next one!March 2nd, 2010 at 07:43pm
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I like the photography aspect, it ties it together well.
and the story is written fairly well, except I find your dialogue hard to follow at times.
Other than that the story is really good!
Update soon? (:February 18th, 2010 at 03:09pm -
Oooooooh frankie is my man! Lol
Thats what i would do if i saw my friends kissing. lol :D
loved it update soon!February 16th, 2010 at 11:04pm -
wow,I really loved the updates,can't wait til the next one!February 14th, 2010 at 10:07pm
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just friends?
Gerard gotta ask her out anytime soon! lol
xxFebruary 14th, 2010 at 01:16pm
poor riley.
but nice chapter!