angioufajwsofjinaoh;ksdjaaaawwwwwwwhhhhhhhh yay Kaiden. :] I was like....okay so I was hoping he wouldn't give in that easily, and, duhh, Lindsey, of course you wouldn't do that. x] I loved the. And just Kaiden in general. He's awesome. :] The torture line...yea, I totally read it as Ryan x] Yayus! On to RT!
Ughhh. I'm so worried! PLEASE don't let Kaiden get hurt! I want him to find out the secret first so he can hurt Jade worse then he's ever been hurt >:D Then they can live happily ever after :D
I love this story! I almost cried! :O Uhhh, Jade is an ass, I want him to get hurt by Kaiden :D That would be wonderful ;D More people need to read this story! You are SOOOOO talented!
OKAY. As I said, here's my mass comment on one part, because I'm far too lazy to leave two. x] So Jade. Jade's a big poopface. For lack of a nicer word, that is. he should just stop existence. And Kaiden. Poor little sucker's smarter than he knows. x] What a shame he doesn't know it. Makes me feel kinda bad inside. And by kinda, I mean pretty freakin bad. Butanywhore. I could tell you any given thing that I want to happen, but the way you write, it's not gonna happen, possibly because you're just that twinny that you know what I want there and intentionally keep it out. =P But, when I came to this here comment page to leave this, I saw where I said that Jade's name should've been Jade Green, and I'm totally holding to that. =P Now, since you're so very curious about this comment, I'll try not to disappoint you. Onward! Kaiden's too much of a sweetie. He's gonna get hurt =\ And I'm gonna cry =\ Again =\ And it's gonna be your fault! Ha. And, truthfully, this story kinda sorta really reminds me of LUR. o.o
I love this <3 I hope they end up together, they make a cute couple, but it's gonna be intresting to read the plot twists...You should make character profiles :D
Haha, Jade makes me laugh! Kaiden's awesome and all, but Jade's awesome too! They're so funny together cause they hate each other! But i wanna know what the twins are up to...