We Live In Such A Twisted World. - Comments

  • pezzie

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    Oh my gosh, that was crazy!
    But I liked it.
    It's the total opposite of Santa.
    He's evil now. XD
    January 4th, 2010 at 08:15am
  • soprano

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    That was extremely creepy.
    I love some of your descriptions:
    Instead of a stomach like a bowl full of jelly he is barely there with a sack of bones and skin instead of toys.

    It is really twisted, and the bluntness of the story makes it more real and disturbing. Great job!
    January 2nd, 2010 at 11:25pm
  • paper trail

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    XD i read this via e-mail but apparently I'm supposed to COMMENT IT TOO?
    :file:

    :tehe: neway, i loved it, obvz. 'cause you're awesome, but. I love the caricature you made, and how it sort of fits the more modern world and i like your characterization as well. i mean, i feel santa clause is as dead a concept as people /wrapping presents/ (god forbid) and i think you captured it very well.

    <3ily bby.
    December 26th, 2009 at 08:44am
  • FICTION

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    This was like... sadly... hilarious. XD
    Made me laugh, but scared me a little.
    December 26th, 2009 at 08:34am
  • istaytrue

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    Woah, good job.
    Nicely written.
    December 26th, 2009 at 08:09am