January 10th, 2010 at 06:17pm
Oh my, this was really good!
I really liked how i could laugh at certain parts, and almost be crying at others. You certainly know how to write something that can play with peoples emotions.
I also like how you built up the characters and showed how they had changed throughout this, it made it much more interesting.
Thanks for entering and good luck!
It's really, really great! Seriously. I love it.
I couldn't help but notice the similarities between both of ours at the beginning, but they didn't stay that way, at all.
Anyway, Mischa's story is sad, but I'm happy that she got a bit of a better ending, even if she's not out of the woods yet. Really great.