Genes. - Comments

I really enjoy your stories.
The layout is always professional and the writing is that kind of writing that really makes you think.
<3

They were the populars, a new brand of human. This reminds me of a book trilogy. They were called uglies, pretties, specials by Scott Westerfield I think...

I'm still trying to work out why this only has one comment though, its really good actually. The start was the one bit I didn't like, it was rather slow moving, you kind of had to force your eyes to keep going because you knew it could be good. Which it was!

It was second person too; brave. It paid off I love it overall.

This was a good short story.