Bloodoath - Comments

I really like this story, I see you haven't updated for awhile but I'd love it if you did!

VO.OV <--- that better, now it has ears ^-^

dude, you know how to write...
please do more

O.O <-- demented puppy dog eyes :)

It's amazing the description in the sword fight (and I fence) The description in you writting. The idea will be a hit. I'm subscriping now. loved it.

ohmygosh. This is really cool.
I love the name Fabian,
and I haven't read any sword fighting scenes in LONG time.

"...invisible veins of red blossomed" is probably something that I'll be thinking about when I wake up. :
Update yes??

I like!

LOVE IT SO FAR! oh...sorry erika. please forgive me *down on knees, hands clasped tightly, pleading showering my face*.
he-he!

*bouncing up and down on seat* I really like it cloaky! It is an interesting idea, and i cannot wait for more! You had better not be like greta, who never updates *growl*. It drives me mad!