Oh my god, that was delicious! I really liked how there was a lead-in to the sex, with the winter and it being cold and such. And I like how Bren asked Ryan if he was sure/they were moving too fast; that made it so much more realistic, other than having them just randomly fucking. Then the actual sex - that was really good. It was detailed to the point of scrumptious and sexy, and not gross. I can't stand it when people have it so detailed it's disturbing - you did a really good job of keeping it believable and not gross. I loooooved it *wiggles eyebrows and makes a random slurping noise* Excellent excellent excellent. A Christmas present, indeed!
A+