From what I've read so far this is interesting and unique, which is always a plus =) I like this and am looking forward to reading more soon. Great job!
I think your style is better than 99% of stuff I've read on here. You are really very talented for your age- I read your first few chapters and expected you to be about three years older than you turned out to be.
Your opening simile, about the cell phone, seemed a bit immature, and the character is very angsty... but then, I suppose we find out why that is later in the story.
I think you have some real potential. Keep writing and practicing!
I particularly like how this is going so far. I feel sorry for him when his mother speaks to him, telling him he was a disappointment, yet again he does have a bad attitude towards himself, his life, and just everything. However, I can understand what he means by it. Oh! And I love it that he's meant to have these powers. I love it. You're a really good writer though. Plus, the best thing I like is that your chapters aren't just 'bunched up' all in one. :) Well done.