I can't help it, I was born this way. - Comments

  • colorful language

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    From what I've read so far this is interesting and unique, which is always a plus =) I like this and am looking forward to reading more soon. Great job!
    February 9th, 2010 at 03:18am
  • Aelf

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    I think your style is better than 99% of stuff I've read on here. You are really very talented for your age- I read your first few chapters and expected you to be about three years older than you turned out to be.

    Your opening simile, about the cell phone, seemed a bit immature, and the character is very angsty... but then, I suppose we find out why that is later in the story.

    I think you have some real potential. Keep writing and practicing!

    -Aelf.
    January 4th, 2010 at 03:54am
  • Crow Maiden

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    This seems really interesting, I like it, it's like a romance with a twist. Hee.
    January 1st, 2010 at 09:55pm
  • Bradley Cooper;

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    Turns out I don't have to go to work 'till 2:30!
    This is really interesting! :)
    I kxnow, like evey other person has said that, but it's true! :P
    December 31st, 2009 at 08:55pm
  • Author

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    I don't understand what is wrong with him, but it's written better than a lot of the crap on mibba.Good job!
    December 31st, 2009 at 07:41pm
  • pezzie

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    This is pretty cool and interesting.
    I like that it's in a guys point of view. :D
    I like it.
    December 31st, 2009 at 07:36pm
  • Mirneeebear

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    aww. They have each other. :]
    December 31st, 2009 at 12:55am
  • MOSHPITROMANCE

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    wooo for update ;p
    December 30th, 2009 at 11:45pm
  • MOSHPITROMANCE

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    hypocrite.
    I like redheads..
    December 30th, 2009 at 08:17pm
  • Mirneeebear

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    I can not wait for you to update. It's a really great story.
    December 29th, 2009 at 09:18pm
  • solovely;

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    Eh-yeah. It was good. (:

    I thought it could have alittle more description to it though.
    December 29th, 2009 at 02:56am
  • MOSHPITROMANCE

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    interesting...
    December 29th, 2009 at 12:58am
  • RawrRandomRawr

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    Great story, I can really relate to this. Hope you update soon.
    December 28th, 2009 at 11:06pm
  • DarkMystique

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    I particularly like how this is going so far.
    I feel sorry for him when his mother speaks to him, telling him he was a disappointment, yet again he does have a bad attitude towards himself, his life, and just everything. However, I can understand what he means by it.
    Oh! And I love it that he's meant to have these powers.
    I love it.
    You're a really good writer though. Plus, the best thing I like is that your chapters aren't just 'bunched up' all in one. :)
    Well done.
    December 28th, 2009 at 11:05pm
  • c.leigh.bennett

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    !ts a really interesting story. I've been looking for one like this for a while... keep writing it.
    December 28th, 2009 at 07:54am
  • MARE

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    i like it its interesting XDDD
    December 28th, 2009 at 02:57am
  • Mirneeebear

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    I really like it. I can't wait to see what you decide to do with this.
    December 28th, 2009 at 02:53am
  • CyFi

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    I really like it so far.

    Reminds me of myself.
    December 28th, 2009 at 02:21am
  • KillingBarbie

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    Liking this story! Keep writing!
    December 28th, 2009 at 01:58am