My Apocalypse - Comments

Ashley desiree nicole ? D: Im guessing you took my name, changed the e, took dez's name, and took nicoles :P But thats aight. ;D

I really did like your story. It would have been better if it was a little more realistic n they went a bit slower, then mayb the emotional parts would have meant more. I still liked it :) on 2 the prequel!

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Good lord...

You're right... Chapter 13 is sad but I like it. It's a good chapter. Update soon please?

Aww :/
That was sad. :(
Update?

Wow, I wanted to cry and kill Craig at the same time

just found this story and i love it. Ronnie is really in FIR <3 they have a myspace too.

interesting. It's nice, but you're moving the story too fast.

aww,

Whoaaaaaa

I agree with afterparty... It all happened a little too quickly but othwise it's a great story :) update soon?

I'm gonna give you my honest opinion. I think (imo) this goes forward too fast. I'm not sure how long they've been together, a week? a month? I don't know cause I've lost the thread. I mean, you don't get engaged in real life either (okay,I know this is fiction, but anyway) after two weeks. You could describe things more, so getting in to the story would be easier.
Otherwise I like this story, and I can't wait to read more.

D: Aww! That's great! What's Craigy gonna do though?
More? x

Update really soon?
This is like heroine. I'm addicted, and I need more. (:

update soon please

More? (:

This is great, you're a phenominal writer. This definitely deserves more hype/comments.

aww.
so i just found this story and let me tell you, I love it!!!

its so great. <3