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  • love potion

    love potion (100)

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    That was very, very good. You have an interesting writing style, one that I happen to like a lot. :)

    I loved the Harry Potter reference you put in there, lol.
    He suddenly knew what Hagrid felt like when he discovered that Madame Maxime was in fact not a giantess.
    January 3rd, 2010 at 02:35am
  • meglywegly

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    I like your story, but it ended awkwardly. It also seems like you actually meant to continue the story, instead of ending it. Overall it was well written and enjoyable to read.
    January 3rd, 2010 at 01:29am
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