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  • ALOTA

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    it was... okay. I think that the emotion wasn't portrayed correctly, because you're just talking about how he hurt her. If it was for my contest I'd say that I LURVED IT... but it is...
    December 31st, 2009 at 09:44pm
  • lions

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    Lovely :-) It almost made me cry.
    December 28th, 2009 at 07:58am
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