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Adorable. They were awkward in a deep relationship, trying to be close but tough boys at the same time. It's adorable! Yellow and Blue? Amazing theme, and you kept it going through out the whole story.
You kept with a simple plot that was completely your own, and you made it absolutely adorable. Everything flowed perfectly at ease, even the awkward parts. I didn't want it to end [though I knew it had to and loved that, too], it was so cute. One of my favorite parts was:

“I love you, Yellow.”

Quinn smiled inwardly to himself, smirking. “And I love you.” It wasn’t until he heard Bert let out an awkward cough before he added, “Blue.”

VERY cute. Sweet. Awkwardly childish. Great job!! :D

The natural blonde bit was funny, yes, but it was adorable overall. The dialogue flows (despite Quinn's awkwardness) and the use of Blue and Yellow is very originial.

I can probably describe this in a single word; adorable. I loved this to no end! It was so cute how they referred to each other as Blue and Yellow and how easily their dialogue flowed together. I could picture the entire scenario in my mind. Fantastic job!

It was so beautiful. I love it like my own child.
I shall read it over and over. The bit about Blue and Yellow? Genius.
So sweet it almost made my eyes water.
If I could hug this, I would. >_>
I laughed, cried, giggled silently....yenno. All that.

(:

It's not too often you come across a story that has no apparent 'loving' going on,
besides that of a friend.

I love all the detail in this, it was all so clear in my minds eye when I read it. I also like how they were all "Screw Jeph, lets watch the stars".

I quite enjoyed all the subtle humor. This was fantastic!
:D

I really, really loved this. I agree with Sami; the yellow and blue bit was absolutely adorable. It made me grin. You're a fantastic writer. :3

I loved this, Teddy! The yellow and blue thing was just too cute, and the "natural blond" bit made me LOL IRL.

Teddy you are way to hard on yourself. This was excellently written and made me chuckle. I especially liked when Quinn kept turning everything into a question. Even his apology became something to question. It was funny.

I LIKED IT & I KNOW OTHER PEOPLE WILL TOO.

SO SHUT THE FUCK UP.

love you!
xo