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  • Clarinet D o r k.

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    1. USA!!!!!!!!!! :)
    2. Amazing! So emotional:) I liked it! Haha
    3. Eh. :/
    March 3rd, 2010 at 10:27pm
  • KamiRawr.

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    I love this. It shows so much emotion, it's great. I love how everyone depends on Lia to build their community or to make it worthwhile. Like, Lia's the center piece that holds everything together.

    1. TEAM CANADA!!!! I'm still celebrating our success! <33
    2. I loved it. I love that William finally shows some emotion rather than hiding it.
    3. I'm ecstatic. =]

    Update soon. :)
    March 1st, 2010 at 02:01am
  • so wrong its sophia

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    1. Which team are you? USA or Canada? USA for everything except hockey..go sydney crosby(:
    2. What are your opinions on this chapter? loved it. it was so sad though, but it needed to be said!
    3. Are you happy? why yes, yes i am (:
    March 1st, 2010 at 01:47am
  • so wrong its sophia

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    1) I COULD NEVER HATE YOUUU!!!!!! <33
    2) Brendon Ryder, because thats one of the names on my "what-to-name-my-future-baby list"
    3) awesome update!!!! i loved it (:
    March 1st, 2010 at 01:38am
  • Lizzie Borden.

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    1. Which team are you? USA or Canada? I live in the USA. My favorite team throughout the olympics was Ukraine and Slovakia though.

    2. What are your opinions on this chapter? It's soooo sad! I felt so bad for Will...

    3. Are you happy? I was, but this made me want to cry.You're such an amazing writer...

    **I love the new layout :)
    March 1st, 2010 at 01:31am
  • CourtneeSmyle

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    this was a really good chapter. I liked it alot.
    I think it might have been a good thing you took longer. you had more time to think about it.
    February 28th, 2010 at 11:01pm
  • Clarinet D o r k.

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    1. I could never hate you.! Haha:) I always take like... A week to update my stories:)
    2. Hm. I like the name Jeremy. :)
    3. I agree with Purple.Rose.Garden . Every update is AMAZING . :)
    February 28th, 2010 at 03:24pm
  • Lizzie Borden.

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    1. I could never be mad at you for taking a while to update. I'm so guilty with my own stories!
    2. Hmmmm. My favorite boy name (as of now) is Cale/Kale. I like it better with a C though. :]
    3. Every update is amazing :D
    February 28th, 2010 at 01:35am
  • so wrong its sophia

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    loved the update, but it was so sad..and i'm kinda late reading it :o
    but i feel awful that she feels that she has to remove herself from the life she had ):
    February 15th, 2010 at 05:42pm
  • CourtneeSmyle

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    I really like the new update.
    I almost cried at the end.
    Good work.
    February 14th, 2010 at 05:31am
  • Lizzie Borden.

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    Oh my gosh that chapter was so sad! I want to cry!! D'x So update soon! I love this story. <3
    February 13th, 2010 at 05:34pm
  • stupidity

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    oh damn i posted so much sorry
    February 6th, 2010 at 03:11am
  • stupidity

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    oh damn i posted so much sorry
    February 6th, 2010 at 03:11am
  • stupidity

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    ~forshadowing~
    oh i like this story, stranger!
    keep it up?
    aw i feel bad for lia
    it showed since the bag picky-uppy-thingy
    er i googled it when she first said it
    but then it turned out she gave a mini explanation of it anyway...
    no cure?
    :(
    February 6th, 2010 at 03:06am
  • stupidity

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    ~forshadowing~
    oh i like this story, stranger!
    keep it up?
    aw i feel bad for lia
    it showed since the bag picky-uppy-thingy
    er i googled it when she first said it
    but then it turned out she gave a mini explanation of it anyway...
    no cure?
    :(
    February 6th, 2010 at 03:06am
  • stupidity

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    ~forshadowing~
    oh i like this story, stranger!
    keep it up?
    aw i feel bad for lia
    it showed since the bag picky-uppy-thingy
    er i googled it when she first said it
    but then it turned out she gave a mini explanation of it anyway...
    no cure?
    :(
    February 6th, 2010 at 03:06am
  • Lizzie Borden.

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    wow. i've read this story from beginning to end, jsut now. OH MY GOSH!! one day i want to be a doctor, so reading this was really fun. during chapter five, i thought it was a brain tumor. i was able to figure out with her symptoms of inablitity to control muscles that her problem was affecting her cerebellum, possibly the brain tumor. there was so much suspense, it was killing me! lol. i love this story! i hope you update soon <3
    February 3rd, 2010 at 02:30am
  • Nat.

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    Awh, loved the update! It was super intense. :O

    1) Never in my life. xD
    2) I have no clue, I'd be scared and sad though!
    3) For sure selfless, she cares so much about others that it seems at times she forgets to care for herself. /:
    February 2nd, 2010 at 01:43am
  • alottay

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    wow.. so sad :( i don't think shes selfish at all.. she does so much for other, WHY IS THIS HAPPENING TO HER .. I AM SO SAD!! ahhh i love this story.. thank you for updating!!
    January 31st, 2010 at 08:42am
  • so wrong its sophia

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    1) noopee
    2) hmm, I would probably get freaked out and go into a spiral downturn and have a spaz attack like I do with most things
    3) I think she is a mix of both...just something about her sends off that signal hmm

    GREAT UPDATE (:
    January 30th, 2010 at 11:09pm