After Snow - Comments

1. YES! Don't make her leave!! :(
2. He needs to talk to her!!! Jeez.
3. Nopee(: It was perfect!

More please?! Soon?! :)

Oh my gosh Lina, that chapter was beyond amazing! I about cried!

1. YES, I was ecstatic when she came back. And now she's leaving. );
2. I think William needs to man up and tell Lia he loves her already. Other than that, he's a sweetheart. (:
3. NO, it's not cliche at all! Trust me, if it was cliche I wouldn't even bother to read it.

is lia going to die?

Oh meh goodness! I almost cried!

damn, she's gonna' die.

saddest thing i've read on this site, but still awesome.

kudos to you :)

Oh my God... What happened?! Why must your torture the readers?! I thought I was going to cry :((
Moreee??? :)

i really like the new chapter. It really keeps you coming back for more.
It's really good. =]

WOW, I love the update. It's so sad and well written. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

OMIGOD this sounds tragic. I really need to know what happens.
but great update (:

LOVED the update. I'm so curious about what Lia has, guess I'll just have to wait. :P

[times]I'm a bit of a creeper, sorry (:
Either way, I like this story; it's really well written and feels a bit different than most of the other stories I've read here. A new perspective, kind of.

My guess would be that Lia has epilepsy. Possibly a brain tumor, but I'm leaning towards epilepsy.

I like how innocent Lia is. But it's not like she's ignorant, just ... innocent.
Update soon?[/times]

SOOOOOOOO AMAZING!!! ahh i love it!!
i'm going crazy trying to figure out whats wrong with lia :(
and i hope she doesn't think shes a 'bad person' AHHH!
you're such a great writer.. i cannot wait to read more :D

Ohmehgoodness! I freakin love it!

ahhh. I really wanna know whats wrong with her.....well not wrong but ya know...its eating my insides lol
but seriously....AMAZING UPDATE (:
<333333 it

this story is amazing!! :|
it's so sad i can't stop cryingg...
and i dont even know what's wrong with her!! AHH
you're awesome, thanks for writing this!!!
ill be waiting for updates lol :D

Love it(:
Can't wait to see what's wrong with her!! ahh! :D

Aw, cute update. This story is so good. [:

aww, he looooveees herr <33 this update was amazing
okay, so I got the notification for this update and I jolted up and yelped and my family just stared at me lol. they obviously don't get it -_-

okay, so I just read this story and its AMAZING!
I can't wait for more updates :)
**subscribes**

Love the update!! :)

Um.
1. Nope(:
2. Um. No...
3.William?