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  • Clarinet D o r k.

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    1. YES! Don't make her leave!! :(
    2. He needs to talk to her!!! Jeez.
    3. Nopee(: It was perfect!

    More please?! Soon?! :)
    January 26th, 2010 at 03:06am
  • Nat.

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    Oh my gosh Lina, that chapter was beyond amazing! I about cried!

    1. YES, I was ecstatic when she came back. And now she's leaving. );
    2. I think William needs to man up and tell Lia he loves her already. Other than that, he's a sweetheart. (:
    3. NO, it's not cliche at all! Trust me, if it was cliche I wouldn't even bother to read it.
    January 25th, 2010 at 02:03am
  • InvincibleZebra

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    is lia going to die?
    January 25th, 2010 at 01:17am
  • CourtneeSmyle

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    Oh meh goodness! I almost cried!
    January 25th, 2010 at 12:44am
  • abbey-

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    damn, she's gonna' die.

    saddest thing i've read on this site, but still awesome.

    kudos to you :)
    January 24th, 2010 at 11:46pm
  • Clarinet D o r k.

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    Oh my God... What happened?! Why must your torture the readers?! I thought I was going to cry :((
    Moreee??? :)
    January 21st, 2010 at 12:51am
  • CourtneeSmyle

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    i really like the new chapter. It really keeps you coming back for more.
    It's really good. =]
    January 19th, 2010 at 11:36pm
  • Nat.

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    WOW, I love the update. It's so sad and well written. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
    January 19th, 2010 at 03:06am
  • so wrong its sophia

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    OMIGOD this sounds tragic. I really need to know what happens.
    but great update (:
    January 19th, 2010 at 02:58am
  • Nat.

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    LOVED the update. I'm so curious about what Lia has, guess I'll just have to wait. :P
    January 16th, 2010 at 08:59am
  • Electric Warrior

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    [times]I'm a bit of a creeper, sorry (:
    Either way, I like this story; it's really well written and feels a bit different than most of the other stories I've read here. A new perspective, kind of.

    My guess would be that Lia has epilepsy. Possibly a brain tumor, but I'm leaning towards epilepsy.

    I like how innocent Lia is. But it's not like she's ignorant, just ... innocent.
    Update soon?[/times]
    January 15th, 2010 at 10:43pm
  • alottay

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    SOOOOOOOO AMAZING!!! ahh i love it!!
    i'm going crazy trying to figure out whats wrong with lia :(
    and i hope she doesn't think shes a 'bad person' AHHH!
    you're such a great writer.. i cannot wait to read more :D
    January 13th, 2010 at 08:13am
  • CourtneeSmyle

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    Ohmehgoodness! I freakin love it!
    January 13th, 2010 at 12:32am
  • so wrong its sophia

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    ahhh. I really wanna know whats wrong with her.....well not wrong but ya know...its eating my insides lol
    but seriously....AMAZING UPDATE (:
    <333333 it
    January 12th, 2010 at 11:55pm
  • alottay

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    this story is amazing!! :|
    it's so sad i can't stop cryingg...
    and i dont even know what's wrong with her!! AHH
    you're awesome, thanks for writing this!!!
    ill be waiting for updates lol :D
    January 5th, 2010 at 11:27am
  • Clarinet D o r k.

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    Love it(:
    Can't wait to see what's wrong with her!! ahh! :D
    January 5th, 2010 at 03:10am
  • Nat.

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    Aw, cute update. This story is so good. [:
    January 5th, 2010 at 12:39am
  • so wrong its sophia

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    aww, he looooveees herr <33 this update was amazing
    okay, so I got the notification for this update and I jolted up and yelped and my family just stared at me lol. they obviously don't get it -_-
    January 4th, 2010 at 11:56pm
  • so wrong its sophia

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    okay, so I just read this story and its AMAZING!
    I can't wait for more updates :)
    **subscribes**
    January 2nd, 2010 at 05:33am
  • Clarinet D o r k.

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    Love the update!! :)

    Um.
    1. Nope(:
    2. Um. No...
    3.William?
    January 1st, 2010 at 07:31pm