Nightmare Cove - Comments

Wow this is really really interesting. I like it a lot.

write more please!

Die, this is getting better and better. Well, better is a weak word. I liked this chapter. So much. Believe me, I was shivering while reading. This chapter gave me goosebumps. You continued with mystery, and it suits you. This genre really suits you.

Awesome story! I hope to read more soon.

!!!!! I feel honored. :tehe:

Rhapsody:

Josipa:

Really, I agree with the guys (:
I really liked it. It looks like something I'd write.
What do I like about your writing style?
You write simple, which I truely do like - you make it all easy to understand,
easy to imagine. And I could imagine every single picture.

I hope you won't mind me saying this -
I wish you hadn't said that it was her mother.
Why? I like when in the beginning of some story,
an author mentions something that describes a person,
something that might remind us of the same person afterwards
(roses, in this case). I'm trying to say that
I like it better when you leave it kinda unexplained -
meaning, you leave it to readers (:

I belive that if you hadn't said that it was her mother,
people would have realized that she was
due to the smell of roses (:

Please, don't shoot me :cheese:

I can't believe you commented on my story. :omfg:

I won't shoot you- I'd rather someone to tell me what they thought than telling me it was good. :lol: I really don't know why I wrote it that way, because I was thinking that but then I thought it would be too confusing and I just wanted it to be simple...Yeah, Idk...I'll be sure to add some mystery!

Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111

Don't thank me, Rhapsody (: I enjoyed reading it, not because of the death and stuff but mystery veiling the story (:

Josipa:

Really, I agree with the guys (:
I really liked it. It looks like something I'd write.
What do I like about your writing style?
You write simple, which I truely do like - you make it all easy to understand,
easy to imagine. And I could imagine every single picture.

I hope you won't mind me saying this -
I wish you hadn't said that it was her mother.
Why? I like when in the beginning of some story,
an author mentions something that describes a person,
something that might remind us of the same person afterwards
(roses, in this case). I'm trying to say that
I like it better when you leave it kinda unexplained -
meaning, you leave it to readers (:

I belive that if you hadn't said that it was her mother,
people would have realized that she was
due to the smell of roses (:

Please, don't shoot me :cheese:

I can't believe you commented on my story. :omfg:

I won't shoot you- I'd rather someone to tell me what they thought than telling me it was good. :lol: I really don't know why I wrote it that way, because I was thinking that but then I thought it would be too confusing and I just wanted it to be simple...Yeah, Idk...I'll be sure to add some mystery!

Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111

Really, I agree with the guys (:
I really liked it. It looks like something I'd write.
What do I like about your writing style?
You write simple, which I truely do like - you make it all easy to understand,
easy to imagine. And I could imagine every single picture.

I hope you won't mind me saying this -
I wish you hadn't said that it was her mother.
Why? I like when in the beginning of some story,
an author mentions something that describes a person,
something that might remind us of the same person afterwards
(roses, in this case). I'm trying to say that
I like it better when you leave it kinda unexplained -
meaning, you leave it to readers (:

I belive that if you hadn't said that it was her mother,
people would have realized that she was
due to the smell of roses (:

Please, don't shoot me :cheese:

Aw, ty guys.

:o this is amasing. please continue! :D
~

Die, this truly is an amazing start. Whether you believe me or not, it is.

And I can see so much potential this could have in the future. It's SOOOOOOO different to anything I've ever seen on Mibba.

More people need to read this!!!!!!! -threatens people-

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
;lhndsgal;kdrfhk!!!