Pandora's Box - Comments

"Angry we're fighting sex" lol

*dancing in the dark with Dobby*

Haha, that's such a Zacky line...

lisamargaret:

Aw, that was sweet.
I notice the chapter was titled, The Lies.
Great decision.

lol I wish that everything was that well thought out. I get all my chapter titles from song lyrics and it just so happened that the line in the song was 'the lies' :)

Brilliant update.
Can't wait for more.

Aw, that was sweet.
I notice the chapter was titled, The Lies.
Great decision. I can't wait for all the drama.
Keep up the great work.

uh oh! somethings gunna happen..

O.O

What's gonna happen next?

and let the drama ensue

hey, abs love it

Yeah I like the tweaks to the first few chapters.

Last chapter was awesome. I prefer female Tattoos to be in subtle places too.
awesome story

I have a feeling that this is going to be one of my favorites xD

That last chapter was awesome !
I really love this story. <3 =]

This is a really good story! Love it and can't wait for more.

lol yeah, I know it's pretty much the same. I had intended to re-write it but just changing the tense made it the way I wanted it.

I'm glad you like to write it this way. Even though it's pretty much the same, it's still awsome xD

You guys might have noticed that the story title, chapter titles and the main character's name have all changed. Hope it doesn't confuse anyone.

And the story will be written 3 chapters in first person then one chapter in third and so on (the same way I wrote my Frank and Ruby stories).

Hope you all like the new and improved version of this story, it feels so much better to write it this way.

I love this story !
A7X stories are my favourite.
You've done a pretty good job on this.
Can't wait for more.
I'm definately subscribing. :]

glasgow_lass:

hey guys, this story has really been bugging me lately. It just seems really flat (to me anyway) and I don't like that it's all in third person as I prefer writing in first.

So I think I'm gonna have a go at re-writing the stuff I have and re-posting it.

Thanks for reading this version though, hopefully the new one will be better :)

Do whatever you want, but be aware that this story is great (:

hey guys, this story has really been bugging me lately. It just seems really flat (to me anyway) and I don't like that it's all in third person as I prefer writing in first.

So I think I'm gonna have a go at re-writing the stuff I have and re-posting it.

Thanks for reading this version though, hopefully the new one will be better :)

Oooh good.
Really well written.
:D