October 29th, 2007 at 12:04am
Pandora's Box - Comments
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Thanks for all your comments guys, glad you are enjoying it!October 28th, 2007 at 03:47am
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this is awesome. :]October 28th, 2007 at 02:53am
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eh this next conversation between them isnt gunna be goodOctober 28th, 2007 at 02:48am
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Aww, poor Zacky. He's gonna be crushed O.OOctober 28th, 2007 at 02:16am
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Uh Oh he's really not going to like thisOctober 28th, 2007 at 02:31am
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see... I'd be ringing Zacky first to make sure he was ok with it... no wonder he's gonna be pissed if she rings and says, "I can't make your tour, but I'm off to Miami. See ya."...
Keep this coming, I love it :D:DOctober 27th, 2007 at 04:56pm -
Awesome update, as per usual.October 27th, 2007 at 03:54am
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great updateOctober 27th, 2007 at 03:01am
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Another good update
Zack won't like it but hey, its not upto him.
I think Matt might be pissed too.....October 27th, 2007 at 02:16am -
Zacky isn't going to like thisOctober 27th, 2007 at 01:41am
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Jesus Christ Dude - Val's like... drop dead gorgeous. I don't think I've seen any other girl that beautiful... she's like... incredibley fuckable. Stop looking at Aubrey - feast your eyes on your girl!!
keep this coming, it's awesome :D:DOctober 26th, 2007 at 11:24pm -
What a shock, I agree with the two that commented before me... Lalala... Let's dance with Dobby!October 26th, 2007 at 07:50pm
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Awesome.
And I agree with Generous Hypocrisy, it wasn't pervy in the slightest.
It actually gave it alot of feeling, and I feel you did an awesome job at describing his desire for Aubrey, and how guilty he feels for actually feeling that way.
And I hope she ends up going on tour after all. That would be awesome.
I can't wait to see what comes of their relationship.October 26th, 2007 at 06:55am -
It's not pervy in the slightest.- glasgow_lass:
- thanks for all your comments, they inspire me to write more and better :)
Writing fom a guy's POV is really difficult! I hope I didn't make Matt too pervy (well any more pervy than guys usually are :D)
It's written from his POV very very well.
He seems almost apologetic that he feel that way.
Well that;s what I get anyway :DOctober 26th, 2007 at 04:22am -
tsk tsk tsk you shouldn't be thinking those things MattOctober 26th, 2007 at 03:44am
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thanks for all your comments, they inspire me to write more and better :)
Writing fom a guy's POV is really difficult! I hope I didn't make Matt too pervy (well any more pervy than guys usually are :D)October 26th, 2007 at 03:33am -
Since when was "sleeping" a code name for sex?! This is great - as all your stories are *whines about your talent*
Keep this coming :D:DOctober 26th, 2007 at 12:38am -
another great update.
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the mentioning of angry sex part at the end was the bestOctober 24th, 2007 at 06:24am
Keep this coming, it's awesome :D:D