Oo, I really like it. One thing, though. When a person is talking to another person, when they say said persons name there is a comma before it. Like “C’mon Sam, get up. First day at Hogwarts!” In that you need a comma before Sam... just saying. Anywho, I'm going to subscribe cos I really like it. =3
January 30th, 2010 at 10:24pm
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