Would You Rather? - Comments

I liked it. It was cute. The only problem I had with it was that she seemed a little too handsy and/or sultry for the "awkward, pre-pubescent, adolescent love" vibe. Everything else though, I thought was really well written.

Comment swap brought me here and I'm glad it did, since it's been ages since I read a HP story. And it has definitely been a very long time since I read an Oliver Wood story.

But anyway, on with the story: very nice!
I like how instead of making up something completely new, you take a quote from the book and give us some background on that boy, that moment. Interesting choice!
As for the 'love story' itself, I love how you wrote them. It's sad and humorous at the same time to find that Oliver did not end up getting the girl after all. It makes your story original, which is always good in my book.

Overall: great job!

Comment swap sent me here.

I love Harry Potter, so you're in luck! I'm going to be more than happy to read this, so you'll probably end up with a good comment! I love your layout, but then again, I love Oliver Wood, so I suppose that's a given.

I love how you start off with the quote from the first film. I always find it interesting to see known scenes through someone else's eyes, so I'm really glad you've written that in. You've added in Fred and George, so you get +1000000000 points from me, haha! I completely wasn't expecting the end, I was expecting a sappy romance, so well done on the slightly comedic touch! Your description and dialogue are spot on throughout.

'Seems like you're secret admirer' should read 'Seems like your secret admirer', but that's the only grammar error I came up against whilst reading. Well done on this, it's a hilarious, adorable and completely brilliant take on that quote! :)

that was cute! i really liked it. :)

Haha that was awesome

haha, Oh my god Poor Oliver!!!
You got what you were aiming for :)

Once i get all the entries I'll start judging :))