As Lovers Left Me To Bleed Alone - Comments

Absolutely loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I wonder where Ryan is taking her? To the ret of his pack? Who knows? Please update soon!!!

Yes! My computer has stopped acting bi-polar and I was finally able to read the chapter! The name Ryan fit perfectly in there. I liked the chapter alot. Although Ryan seemed to be a bit on the pervy side, I still loved him. Who were those guys!?!? I did not expect you to throw that in there at all. Can't wait until the next chapter! Update soon!

Send it to me, please. My computer is kinda pissing me off about this whole blocking pages deal. I'm about ready to throw it out the window and scream my head off. I at least saw the title of the chapter. Broken Wings. I think I know what its about, but if I describe it it will turn out entirely wrong, so I'm going to keep my prediction to myself.

No, Zack wasn't too baby- like. But the way you described him in that chapter made him seem more....forceful. You made him seem like he had self control, but at a second could loose it. That even if he didn't know Anna, he had authority over her because he could control his inner wolf better.

I actually know alot of Zack's, but all of them are weird. So, yeah, I would say the name Zack is kind of weird.

It probably will go back to normal in a few weeks, but if you update before then I definatly can't wait that long. I said Ryan! Don't forget about the name Ryan! Josh and Jade sound good together! This is kind of off topic but not really, but I was sitting here trying to come up with names for that guy and the name Lorenzo, (for no reason, don't even ask why) just popped in to my head. I know his name can't Lorenzo, but hey, I can brain storm!

HI!! In my personal opinion, I think his name could be Damien, since her name is Anna. To me, the names have to sound good together in order for the characters to interact with each other. For example, the names Bob and Andrea wouldn't be people in the same story, because they don't sound right together. Or maybe the dude's name could be Alex. No names with an 'R' in it though. Well, maybe Ryan could work. I just listed three of the names that came to the top of my head, so they should be of some use to you.

I think that you should make the werewolves special for your story. Maybe have each of them have special powers along with their werewolf abilites, I don't know. Certainly, don't make them as big as the wolves in Stephenie Meyer's book. If Anna lives in a small town, then if people saw a giant wolf running around, wouldn't they call the police or something? If the wolf just looks like a stray dog wandering around, or could be disguised as one, than no one would have to worry. See me point?

P.S. My computer is acting stupid, and is starting to block your story, but I want to keep reading it. So I was wondering if you could e-mail it to me. You don't have to if you don't want to. I just still want to help you with your story if you are having trouble with it.

I hope I helped alot. Pce! >.<

Oh, and HAPPY BIRTHDAY SARAH!!!!!

Absolutly loved the latest installment. I wonder who the new guy is. He's probably another wolf, but, I wonder what he's doing in her town. I can't wait until you write more. If you need any help with ideas or editing, I'll be happy to help, really. Update soon please!

Ohhh, i like it! Moreee :)

I most definatly like it. Grammer is big, but I can help you with that if you want me to. I like the story line. I never though of making it like it. It reminds me of the movie Jumper. Where the lead character finds out he can teleport from place to place. But when he gets older people try to kill him, and he finally finds out that he's not so special, lol. Anyway, I can't wait until the next chappy. I'll comment when I can. *Subscribes*

I like it. =]