aw but I liked Paul he didn't have to die gosh Nate's just to protective but at least their together now! in some twisted way I want them to win I might possibly have stockholm syndrome too or it may just be the way you write that makes people want the "bad guy" to win =)
woah hi I'm a new reader. saw your story yesterday and finished it today. Didn't think I would like it but ended up liking it a lot. :} consider me a new reader/subscriber.