Leaves of September - Comments

I really liked the title of this- it gave me awarm feel, so I clicked!
so i like the summary, it gives you a little inside about what's going ot happen, with just one line
not many people can do that, so bonus points for you ;) haha
aww one person is over the other, but the other is not :/ never a good thing
i know many people have said this, but the first word in the story should be you're
this is sad to read :( you can tell how much one cares for the other
I relaly liked this, it was sad, but still very well written <3 :)

I love it! Amazing writing with a great use of metaphor. I really loved the last paragraph.

Your gone just like the sun in the sky only the sun comes back, you do not. Maybe one day I will let you go along with the memories only one can hope. Your gone just like the leaves of September.

It was just... wow. <3

So, I like that line in the summary. Your Gone Just Like The Leaves Of September. Though this was beautifully written, and a had a kind of calm/sad atmosphere to it, there were some grammar errors: Your gone just like the leaves of September I look at the pictures of use to be that wraps my heart. Your, should be you're. Then, I didn't really get this rest of this sentence for, it didn't make sense to me...

I also adored this line; Your gone just like the sun in the sky only the sun comes back, you do not. This was short and sweet. Nicely done <3

I agree with the previous comment. You definitely are talented, & I really liked the way this story went. I was picturing it all in my head basically, & it was well done. Good work once more!

This was really well writen. I like the way you say your gone like the sun but sun always comes back, you do not. Thats not the exact words but you know what i am talking about. Thats was my favorite line. This was pretty, you are a talented writer.