He's my brother's greatest bestbud.I hate him.Or so i thought? - Comments

Ok thanks! I will try to be more detailed. I think I improved on the detail though in the 3rd chapter! Can yall wait until the party chapter?!!

I loved it! All though maybe a bit more detail anyway it was still good
I cant wait for you to update!!!!

Thank you very much and I will!!
:)

I liked reading your story, and I'm a subscriber now. Wooh!
Anyway, hehe, some constructive criticism? :3
I think that it would've been a lot of more of a help to your story if you could've added more detail? Like, for your characters' appearance, their surroundings/atmosphere.
And you're missing a comma at the ends of each of your characters' dialogues.
I'm loving the Izzy vs. Carson 'moments,' hehe. ^^
I found it sad, too, when he keeps on calling her a 'b*tch.* Idiot. :(
Please update soon, whenever you can?
I can't wait to read more.
Well done, though.

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