The Story With No Ending - Comments

Taylor that was beautiful. It had a perfect plot with such a sweet ending.

You're an amazing writer.

Please don't stop writing?

I really liked this.
It was a very imaginative idea.
I also really loved the banner, I thought it was really pretty.
You did a great job with this, very original.
It sort of makes you think.
You did a great job!

Wow, that was amazing! I loved how descriptive it was and how the book ended up a box! The layout was really cute, I spent a couple minutes just staring at it <3

OHHHH! that was beautiful!
i really loved the ending, it made it all seem even more magical.

This is really good! I loved it! ;D

This story was amazing.

This was really good! I really enjoyed it. I liked the detail in it, and the creativity. The game they played was a good idea, and the fact that the whole thing was a 'dream' was a really great idea.

I loved the drama of it. The fact that it was her sister's fiance made everything better, and more exciting. It was sort of sad in the end that they couldn't be together.

The end was another thing I really liked about it. She woke up and had loved the dream, and the book was actually something from her dream. So it's sort of a mysterious ending. Was the dream something that happened to her in a past life, or something she'd heard of?

Very interesting. There were a few grammar issues, but nobody is perfect. Thanks for entering it in the contest! :)

That was really enjoyable. Sweet but also with some bitterness and that gives it more impact than if it had just one of those.

I really really liked this reading this one! I can't say which one I like better, though. They were both exceptionally good.

I love it! I wish I could know what happened but that's kind of the point of the story. lol