Excellent, especially because you have unique, self created characters. There were a few little grammar things that you could easily fix later on, but I found this very enjoyable. The details of her cutting were gruesome and captivating. I look forward to the upcoming chapters.
well, you can't just STOP there!!!!! we obviously need to find out what happens when she sees her brother, and her aunt, and if she tells\shows either of them the source of her problems and scars! jeeze woman!
December 31st, 2009 at 08:20pm
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I can't wait for the next one! I'm really excited to see what happens!
----love, Austyn