Testing the Water - Comments

I don't mind the multiple points of view- it'd be confusing if you switched back and forth a lot, but you don't do that, you keep all the segments together (so it's a unit of A or B and that's it, not like, ABABCABABC). So I guess if I were at all coherent I'd be trying to say that I think you pull off the different points of view well- in moderation it makes the chapter more interesting. :)

oh wow...
tk really messed up this time
loved the update
please update soon : )

Hey, nice update. I like reading this story. I think you meant staring/stared, not starred, and I think there was a to/too or two in there, but otherwise, the spelling/grammar is better than last time :)

Yay for an update. I really needed a good distraction, so, thanks!

O.O wow......talk bout unlucky thirteen........i knew this wud happen!! xD anyways i like actually cried while reading this......but it was really good!! i cant wait to see wat happens next ;P ~britty~

I like your story- there seemed to be more spelling/grammar errors in this chapter than usual, but the chapter was cute!

Nice update. I always like reading more of this story.

ok first off.....WTF!!!!! u changed ur username again?!!!! gosh the things u dont tell me nicole ;P and i liked this chptr!! xD im excited for the next chptr!!! :D i luv anna!!! cant wait to c nicole and ty "reunite" eh nixie ;P (yes ppl i am canadian!!! i say eh!!! gosh! xP) xD anyways cant wait to read more ~britty~

Wow, she sure does a whole lot of sleeping with guys who aren't her bf. I've never met a guy who was cool with that. There was a weird sentence repeat in there someplace, too. BUT I'm glad you're writing the sequel now, and I'm sorry I didn't find it sooner (so, I marathoned it!).

xD i luv andy!!!! doesnt he make a great pillow? ;P and dom dom dom y is tk so busy? ;P and better question yet who is he so busy with? ;P lotsa drama!!!! cant wait for the next chptr ;P ~britty~

i so love this story!!!!
there is something fishy about the way tk is acting & it makes me think that the prlogue is going to happen in the chapter where she returns to the burgh!!!
its cute how andrew loverock is her lover boy lol
cant wait for the next chapter!!
<3 !

Thanks for the shout out and I really liked this chapter!

Such a great story! I seriously can't wait for the next chapter so please update soon!!! :D

O.O DX I AM NOT OLD!!!!!!!!!! xD tat was really good!
i luv andrew, luv jared of course ;P hate shcenn -.- luv tk too ;P but most of all.......i luv my krissy xD but u knew all this ;P
tat was great nixie and u know wat i just thought of? we havnt mentioned maxy in a while....... sorry max :( luv ya :D
cant wait for the next chptr ;P ~britty~

I read it, but i started with BTI a few days ago so I had to get thru that one and this one, so that's why it took me so long to subscribe and comment, because I don't comment on finished stories or if i'm in the middle, but please keep updating for my sake!

xD the chptr was "incredible" nixie ;P i love you krissy!!!!!!! u r fucking amazing!!!!!!! :D XXXXXXXXXXX :D love you lots!!!!!!! luv the rest of the gifts too guys ;P ~britty~

That chapter was incredible!! That's all I have to say.

xD yes!!!! i luv my lil krissy bear ;P hes so amazing!!!! my lil prince charming!! xD luv the dress and cant wait til the party!!!!! ~britty~

the new chapter was really good thanks for updating before you left

awe thanks for the happy birthday and i seriously really do like this story keep up the great work : )