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  • TheCoreysGirl

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    This is really great! :) Very nice job writing it from different points of view, too. :)
    July 29th, 2010 at 06:32am
  • Soy una chica.

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    Good job! I loved how you did the same scenen from different points of view. I also loved the idea of the story. There were a few grammar errors. Also, I really liked the way that you used the word woodpecker.
    March 9th, 2010 at 12:10am
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