So like I laughed at the part that was like "My bag of fun..." and im like "FUNBAGFUNBAGFUNBAG!" in my head over and over again hehehhe SLAAVVEE no im kidding my friend called me that today... maybe its a sign... hahahaha JUSTKIDDING wonderful update... update soon?
Jordyn hehehe she be evil. XD XD XD Poor Jack. He got hurt. They aren't fighting anymore! Yay! This comment isn't as long as last times so I feel kind of like bad? I like you and this story A LOT! OBVIOUSLY you know this. <3
Baw {which is not a word} I loved this and I was like OHSHITYEAHBITCHES when you updated I mean I seriously said that I was in my living room and I was on mibba and then I was like 'Hmmmm I wonder who updated...' and then I clicked the subscriptions thing and then I saw that you updated and then I looked at my friend and shes like "What?" and I go "OHSHITYEAHBITCHESSSSS!" and she just kind of glared at me like I wa insane {which, undoubtably, I am} haha that really happened fotrue {like 'for real' but better} sorry I wasted your time with this fucked up non important comment :]
Aww cute Mickee and Alex momenttt Heheh Jack seems to be all O_O Oh no she talking about Jordyn and Jordyn be all "screw my balls word!" I have no idea why should would be like that but whatever. The next chapter should be in Jordyn's pov... Just saying. Jordyn is my favorite character. For no particular reason.... *is innocent* I also really enjoy Jordyn and Jack fighting. Why? Because I don't know. Yeah but anyway. I really like this story. Its one of my favorites. I think.....where is Rian? Has he even been in this story yet? Hmm. I feel like I'm rambling. So I'm gonna stop. PEACE BRO.
Ohmygosh this is so good my friend sent it to me and told me to read it and ohmygosh I love it it's like Sex on toast hahahaha sorry I really had to make that reference... :3 more soon?<3
Awww Jordyn and Jack fighting is so sad. I hope it all works out good for them. Aww Lex and Jacks had a dream! And they lost it. Cause they because whores. How sad.
revenge sex is no good...especially with a completely smashed alex :/ Great update... jordyn and alex, in my opinion, would be a good pairing I can't wait to read the next chapter :)