Cry the Stars - Comments

i love thiss

Like fingerprints. said, this was perfect.
You took a really original idea and handled it tactfully, and it had a lot of emotion in it.
Well done. :)

The idea of this is brilliant, and very original.
I thought you had written it well, and your vocabulary was really suited to the story.
The use of present tense was amazing.
I cannot find a fault with this <3

I really liked the whole idea of this. I don't think I have or could find anything like this on the site, nor in books; but I may be wrong. For me it's totally new, however.

I love how no one had names. I adore when someone can pull that off, &I usually don't notice until the end, so good job. I love your style, your phrasing &everything really work in this.

I also really love how you found a banner that fit so perfectly. That however makes me wonder which came first.

Well done !

This is really good :)
Are you making it into a full story? I hope you are cos im subscribing haha.
I love it.
Lauren