Something Went Wrong - Comments

:)) wow. already read it all? thank yoooooooooooooooooou

I'm all for damien+sam:D I don't think lucas would make a huge fuss either...

ok people. if you like it tell me...i still have at least 25 coming...cuz i have written 45 till now... but still not finished with it

thank you

You have wonderful taste in cars! Must say I agree with you on the whole car part...

And don't worry about punctuation errors...Commas and all-present exclamation signs are not the things that make a story great! Keep updating :)

Is that Damien's room too? LOL that would be awkward..

I want that Mustang and Ducati. Die for hot.

ok. i will do it. i wrote these way back in may, i think, and i will have to look all of it over an dcorrect it. and make it more interesting too

I really like it, but I just wanted to point out grammar. I love the story, but it's hard to read when things aren't capitalized or commas are forgotten...just cause I'm picky like that.

But keep it up:)

:)) oh yeaaaaaaaaaah :D glad you like it :D

hot guy = thumbs up:D

It's cool! I like the fact that your writing is...hmm...free-styled and not oh-so-stylish.

Just a tiny bit of advice: you might wanna make some paragraphs later on, it gets very tiring to read like this!

But love it anyway~~ *goes to click on subscription link*

I fucking love sam:D *expressing awe* shes AWESOME