i just started to read this cuz i saw you were posting the sequel. it's great so far and i'm only on the second chapter. anyway, i dont know if anyone else pointed this out, but you said pat plays football? k, well, you said that when riley finally got to the game it was already in the "third inning". football doesnt have innings, that's baseball. football has quarters. just thought i'd tell ya. anyway, it's awesome and i cant wait to finish it and get started on the sequel :)
THIS WAS SO GOOD WHILE IT LASTED. I wished it could have been longer :(
But in the sequel I suspect some more DRAMA! ;) Like... Pat realizes he LOVES Riley and then tries stealing him away from Taylor That'd be so like -> O: XD
I loved this story!! it was so cute and im so happy they got together in the end!! they make the cutest couple! Cant wait for the sequel =] please dont make it sad *gives puppy dog eyes*
I love!Though it feels like one of those things where you wait and wait and enjoy the whole thing THEN BAM EVERYONE DIES. But not in the same sense. xD<3 haha. Update Soon..:D?