From the Murks of the Sultry Abyss - Comments

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You look like your about to begin a great story....! Keep posting!

Brilliant, baby cakes! Now, when are we going to move along with this one? I'm ready. I'm back. And I'm not holding anything back. I suggest you do the same. I can't wait till you get down to the nitty gritty of this story. It's going to be one of those great ones. Ione is going to be one of those really fun characters to write for you. Alrighty, love you! xo

Great visual, it was really short but it was better then nothing ;) I like that you aren't bringing in any characters but the main character first so we can really understand and get the character. Post more! <3

That update was short, but I definitely loved it anyway. I remember reading a few stories of drug addiction, and it always rubbed me the wrong way, but I really am genuinely interested in where you are taking this! I love how this entire chapter was pure description, and you really get a feel for this girl you've manifested, she's totally mysterious and a druggie.. but I find her endearing. I almost want to coddle her.

I really am anxious to see where it is that this story goes, and how Brandon will tie in. I almost want to believe he is this stranger she was grinding upon, but I also want to believe he is this nonchalant guy, only watching her from the bar, desperate to work out every detail of her. I am so confused, I love this. You are amazing, twinsy! XOXO

Whaaaat? I fucking love this already and I am in the dark that it is absolutely invigorating, frustrating, and tempting! I particularly love how short this is, yet you definitely start questioning what the situation is, who this person is, and so many other things that are seriously making me lose nerve at my curiosity! All I want is to be loved really got to me for some reason and now I am currently thinking out so many possibilities for this strange and mysterious individual, giving them my own back story and different turns in the road, and then I realized that this is your story and now I am forced to wait for the TRUE reality. So, overall, I am genuinely intrigued and impressed with this.

And I am so glad that you posted this.. I have missed both of your stories dearly and I need a new Brandon dose other than rereading my own story every so often and becoming awkward about it. D: Hooray for your new Boyd tale!

What do I think? I think that you should post more! Love it already :) But I love everything you write. Glad I went to your profile randomly :D