March 28th, 2011 at 08:38am
I'm really liking this so far hehe
I like the plot and everything you have going
And all of the action was really good
Only advice is to try and slow down a little bit and make the build ups a little bigger so then when all of the amazing actions happens i can be sat here like 'wow' xD And left practically speechless
Really likeing this so far and can't wait for another chapter :)
I wonder what could happen haha
*subs*
Grrr haha
When I saw the decription thingy for this I smiled xD
I was like 'that's what I said' lol
Can't wait for more
And good luck with the writers block
I think I'm suffering from it a bit too