June 7th, 2010 at 12:37am
loove the story. very interesting(:
but i was a little confused. does bennessa not like jack?
if not maybe bennessa should act out a little during the dinner or something.
just a suggestion
i enjoyed this story thus far(:
keep up the good work and let me know when you update!
:3 I love this story. Even without my help.
You should add another chapter.